“Is it alive?” Jack poked its pale, rubbery arm with a stick. “Yuki, check if it’s breathing.”
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Tuesday, November 11, 2014
The First Line
You have to hook your readers with the first line. Rewritten it so many times and will probably rewrite it again. Here it is, currently:
“Is it alive?” Jack poked its pale, rubbery arm with a stick. “Yuki, check if it’s breathing.”
“Is it alive?” Jack poked its pale, rubbery arm with a stick. “Yuki, check if it’s breathing.”
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